Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

你所在的班級(jí)有多少同學(xué)？他們家離學(xué)校遠(yuǎn)嗎？他們都如何去上學(xué)？寫一篇短文敘述一下，詞數(shù)不少于60。

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Answer 1

【答案】There are thirtyfive students in my class. Most of them live near① our school. So they usually④ go to school on their bikes. Sometimes④ their parents take them to school. Five students live next to our school. They usually walk to school. They hardly ever② ride bikes. Only two students live far away③ from our school. They usually take a bus to school. I live next to the school，so I always④ walk.

【解析】1. 本文運(yùn)用“三步法”寫如何到達(dá)目的地。文中敘述了班里的三十五個(gè)學(xué)生上學(xué)的不同方式。其中交通方式的表述靈活多變。最后以自己的情況作為結(jié)束。

2. 本文添彩點(diǎn)：

①near在……附近。

②hardly ever 副詞短語(yǔ)，意為“幾乎從不”。

③運(yùn)用far away和上面出現(xiàn)的near對(duì)應(yīng)，住得離學(xué)校遠(yuǎn)近決定了交通方式的不同。

④always, usually, sometimes 等副詞用得恰到好處。

3. 人稱用第三人稱來(lái)寫。

4. 時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。