【題目】 以My Ambition為題寫一篇短文。想想你最喜歡什么職業(yè),請把你將來想做的工作寫出來,并寫明理由,60------80 詞左右.

【答案】

My Ambition

My ambition is to be a doctor. First I can work in tall buildings, Then I can help people who are sick. I think it’s an interesting job. That’s a big goal. I don’t think it is easy to be a doctor. To be a doctor, I’ll need to learn a lot at school. I’m a good student, but I can be better. I’ll work hard to improve myself. I’m sure I can make my dream come true.

【解析】

試題分析:這是一篇命題作文。本文所給材料比較簡單,要求寫出自己將來想做的工作,并寫明理由。因此動筆前要認真挖掘題目內(nèi)涵,勾勒要點,并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時,主語是第一人稱。寫作中注意時態(tài)的變化及主謂一致問題,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點內(nèi)容,表達準確,意思連貫,符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時,文章脈絡(luò)清晰,自然流暢。同時,使用了一些常用的句式和短語,這為文章增色不少。在學習中注意積累,背誦一些常用句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

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