Question

1．在一次英語班會(huì)上，老師請(qǐng)同學(xué)們以Proud of My School 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所給的提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿．內(nèi)容包括學(xué)校面貌，你在校的活動(dòng)，以及你喜歡學(xué)校的原因．
提示詞：big\small，trees，play games，family，be kind to，be\feel proud of．
My school is very big．There are several tall buildings in it．There are more than 2000 students in my school．We have a big playground with lots of trees around it．There are a lot of flowers everywhere．
We have a lot of fun at school every day．After class we play games and do lots of sports，such as playing basketball，football，tennis and so on．We work very hard and do very well in our lessons．
I love my school because it's like a big family．The teachers in my school are very kind to us．I am proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容以Proud of My School說說你的學(xué)校．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1學(xué)校面貌
2你在校的活動(dòng)
3你喜歡學(xué)校的原因
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
there be有
such as 例如
and so on等等
do well in擅長
be kind to sb對(duì)某人友好
be proud of 以…為自豪
【高分句型】
1．We have a big playground with lots of trees around it．
with lots of trees around it獨(dú)立主格做定語
2．I ①am proud of my school ②because it is③one of the best schools in my heart．
①be proud of 以…為自豪
②because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句．
③one+of+the+最高級(jí)+名詞復(fù)數(shù)，最怎樣的…之一．

解答 My school is very big．There are several tall buildings in it．There are more than 2000 students in my school．We have a big playground with lots of trees around it．【高分句型】There are a lot of flowers everywhere．（學(xué)校面貌）
We have a lot of fun at school every day．After class we play games and do lots of sports，such as  playing basketball，football，tennis and so on．We work very hard and do very well in our lessons．（在校的活動(dòng)）
I love my school because it's like a big family．The teachers in my school are very kind to us．I am proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart．【高分句型】（喜歡學(xué)校的原因）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣