Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。

你看過(guò)類似的老人跌倒無(wú)人理會(huì)的新聞嗎？你聽(tīng)說(shuō)過(guò)最美女教師救她的學(xué)生的故事嗎？對(duì)這兩種社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，你有什么看法呢？請(qǐng)你以“Would you like to help others?”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。

內(nèi)容包括：

1. 你對(duì)上面其中一件事的看法。

2. 如果你遇到了這樣的事情會(huì)怎樣做。

3. 講述你的一次類似經(jīng)歷。

作文要求：1. 詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，不得逐字逐句翻譯。　2. 條理清晰，語(yǔ)句連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

Would you like to help others?

After reading the news, I felt very sad. Why didn’t people help the old man? The things they did were so terrible! We need to help each other, don’t we? I think if I meet this kind of thing, I will call the police and try my best to help the old man. Last year, on my way to school, I saw a car accident happen. I stopped and called the police and asked other people to help the woman who was injured. At last, she was saved.

If we help each other every day, our world will be warmer and more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示,認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示，確定文章的中心。注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。盡量使用熟悉句型，使用簡(jiǎn)單句式，同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。文中使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如I will call the police and try my best to help the old man. asked other people to help the woman who was injured.等，定語(yǔ)從句the woman who was injured.，反義疑問(wèn)句和簡(jiǎn)單句等句式使用，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有感染力。