Question

【題目】假如你叫王明，根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)向你的筆友Leo介紹一下你家鄉(xiāng)四季的氣候特點(diǎn)。不少于80字，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

春天：溫暖，陽(yáng)光明媚，蝴蝶在花叢中飛舞。在有風(fēng)的日子里放風(fēng)箏。

夏天：炎熱，白天最高溫度達(dá)到40度。喜歡呆在池塘邊，樹(shù)蔭下。

秋天：涼爽，樹(shù)葉變黃，落在地上一堆堆，非常美麗。農(nóng)民收貨莊稼。

冬天：寒冷，白雪覆蓋一切，看不到美麗的花，天很冷，但我們喜歡在外面堆雪人。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Leo,

I love my hometown and I hope you can come and visit it one day.

Take care

Wang Ming

Dear Leo,

I am glad to hear from you. I am writing to you to tell you the weather in my hometown.

In spring it is sunny and warm. You can see many butterflies dancing on flowers. When there is wind, we often fly kites in the fields. In summer it is very hot and the temperature can reach 40 degree. We like staying beside ponds to keep cool . In autumn it is cool and beautiful. Leaves grow yellow and fallen leaves are everywhere. Farmers are busy harvesting crops . In winter it is cold . When it snows, we like to play with snow and make snowmen.

I love my hometown and I hope you can come and visit it one day.

Take care

Wang Ming

Dear Leo,

【解析】

試題分析：

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的一年四季。本題給出的材料較為詳細(xì)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作。根據(jù)所給材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，同時(shí)給出的要點(diǎn)都要寫(xiě)到文章中。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的全部要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)改動(dòng)，使用的句式有簡(jiǎn)單句，并列句和復(fù)合句，靈活多變，而且層次分明。通過(guò)一些這些句式的靈活搭配，使得文章避免單純的重復(fù)，同時(shí)使用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句和短語(yǔ)如：be busy doing使得短文既流暢又邏輯清楚。讓我們對(duì)作者的家鄉(xiāng)有了一個(gè)比較全面的了解。