Question

【題目】為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長，某英文報(bào)開辟了Heart-to-heart專欄。假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中他向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，容易發(fā)脾氣，覺得家庭、學(xué)校規(guī)則太多，與父母、老師、同學(xué)相處不好，常常要和他們爭吵……使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1. 表示理解并給予安慰； 2. 提出建議并說明理由。
注意： 1. 詞數(shù)：80左右； 2. 信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息； 3. 信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：have too much study pressure; be angry easily; too many rules; argue with... ; be allowed to do; it's a good way to do... communicate with; relax…
Hi Worried,
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. Teenagers……
Yours,
Jamie

Answer 1

【答案】Hi Worried:
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends，as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger .And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours，
Jamie
【解析】
寫作思路：
（1）確定主題，為寫信人解答困惑。
（2）確定寫作順序——分三段，以總分總結(jié)構(gòu)進(jìn)行。
（3）確定每段內(nèi)容：第一段，總起，向?qū)Ψ奖磉_(dá)慰問，使用給出的首句即可；第二段，分點(diǎn)給出建議，并加上自己的內(nèi)容；第三段，總結(jié)全文，并希望對(duì)方心情可以快點(diǎn)好起來。