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【題目】書面表達

青少年很容易因為學習和生活上的事情與父母發(fā)生爭執(zhí)。上周Tom就因為父母不同意他使用手機一事和父母大吵了一架。那么青少年是否應該使用手機?大家各執(zhí)一詞。請根據(jù)下表的信息，寫一篇短文，說明大家的不同看法，并請談談你的觀點及理由。不要忘了給Tom兩條建議，緩和他和父母的關系。要求：文章包含表中所有信息，要有恰當?shù)拈_頭，結(jié)尾和過渡語，使文章更具可讀性。字數(shù)：100—120。保持書面整潔。 ·

Should use mobile phone	Shouldn’t use mobile phone	Your opinion and advice
1. call parents if necessary	1. not good for health	…
2. listen to music	2. a waste of time

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Answer 1

【答案】

The teenagers argue with their parents easily because of learning and living things .Last week，Tom argued with his parents about the mobile phones.Some pepole think teenagers should use mobile phone，because they think teenagers can call their parents if necessary.And they can listen to music.Some pepole don’t think teenagers should use mobile phones，they think mibile phones are not good for their health.And using mobile phones is a waste of time.I hold the view that young people can use a mobile phone， because it can help us to learn， and also listen to music tohave a relax.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文叫小作者介紹青少年們是不是應該用手機的觀點。在寫作時要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點一定齊全。句子要完整，表達準確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當使用一些連接詞來加強文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達準確流利，要點齊全。文中有一些好的表達方式如I hold the view that young people can use a mobile phone， because it can help us to learn， and also listen to music tohave a relax.等等。