Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

91. 假如你是某雜志社編輯Mr. Knowledgeable,根據(jù)中學(xué)生 Bob的來信內(nèi)容，給他寫封回信，幫助解決他所遇到的問題。字?jǐn)?shù)80—100，開頭已給出。

Dear Knowledgeable,

My problem is that I can’t get on with my family. My parents always say “no” to my ideas without any reason. So I often quarrel(吵架) with them. Also, my brother is not very nice to me. He always refuses to let me watch my favorite TV show. Instead, he watches whatever he wants until late at night. I don’t think this is fair. At home, I always feel lonely and nervous. Is that normal? What can I do?

Bob

Dear Bob,

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Bob,

It’s normal to have these feelings. Why don’t you talk about these feelings with your family? First, it’s not right to quarrel with your parents. I don’t think quarrelling can solve problems. You’d better have a talk with your parents. Tell them to have a discussion with you before saying “no” to your ideas. Second, Why not sit down and communicate with your brother? You should explain that you don’t mind him watching TV all the time. However, he should let you watch your favourite TV show. I hope things will be better soon.

Knowledgeable

【解析】

這是一篇書信體作文，要求我們以某雜志社編輯Knowledgeable的身份，給Bob寫一封回信。首先我們應(yīng)將Bob的來信讀一遍，弄清楚Bob遇到的問題，然后給他提一些建議，幫助他解決他的問題。通過閱讀可知，Bob的問題是與他家人不能友好的相處，總是感到很孤獨、緊張。這樣的問題是中學(xué)生的日常生活中普遍存在的問題，在教材中也討論過類似的話題，因此這個題目是學(xué)生們比較熟悉的，寫作時，學(xué)生們會有話可說，我們只需要將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達(dá)出來即可。需要注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，寫作時，不能逐詞將漢語翻譯成英語，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型。尤其注意完整的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，以常見的是主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)為主。為提升文章檔次，可穿插使用并列句、復(fù)合句，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。還可以使用一些特殊句式，如感嘆句、倒裝句等，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏。同時注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使上下文意連貫，語句通順。