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【題目】寫作

據(jù)國家衛(wèi)生計生委通報，近期我國傳染病防控形勢嚴峻。作為中學(xué)生，為了使自己遠離各種傳染性疾病，我們?nèi)粘Ｉ�活中�?yīng)該怎樣保持健康呢？請以“How to keep ourselves healthy”為題，根據(jù)提供的信息和要求寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容要點如下：

1.了解預(yù)防傳染病的知識，不害怕傳染病。睡眠充足，多鍛煉。

2.衛(wèi)生：勤洗手，注意室內(nèi)通風(fēng)，不隨意亂扔垃圾。

3.飲食：多喝水，多吃新鮮水果和蔬菜，不吃......

4.小心感冒，如果發(fā)燒、咳嗽，......

要求：1. 詞數(shù) 90 左右。短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2. 短文必須包括以上要點，但不要逐字翻譯，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使短文連貫、通順。

3. 短文不得出現(xiàn)正是的人名或校名等相關(guān)信息。

4. 參考詞匯：傳染病 communicable disease

How to keep ourselves healthy

The communicable disease influences our daily life and health. What’s more， it can make people lose their lives. What can we do to keep ourselves healthy?

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If we do like that， we’ll have a happy and healthy life.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version.

The communicable disease influences our daily life and health. What’s more， it can make people lose their lives. What can we do to keep ourselves healthy?

First， learn some knowledge about preventing communicable diseases and don’t be afraid of the terrible diseases. We should have enough sleep and try to do more exercise. Second， we should clean our rooms every day and often open the windows. We must often wash hands. In public， we shouldn’t spit or throw litter. Next， we need to drink more water， never or seldom eat junk food but eat more fresh vegetables and fruit. Finally， be careful not to catch a cold. If we have a fever or a cough， we must go to the doctor at once.

If we do like that， we’ll have a happy and healthy life.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是一篇給提綱作文，首先要求仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息。明確有哪些要點。本文以“如何保護我們的安全為中心”，要求從內(nèi)容提示要點的四個方面展開寫作。要包含提示的所有要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。短文用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第一人稱形式。要注意句型結(jié)構(gòu)的準確使用，使短文連貫，通順。

寫作亮點：本范文包含了提示的所有要點，語句通順，行為連貫。第一段首先描述疾病的危害，自然引入話題：怎樣保護我們的健康？第二段為全文的重點內(nèi)容，寫得詳細、具體。本段用first， second， next， finally等等引出各要點，層次清楚。中心突出，主題鮮明。最后簡短結(jié)尾：如果這樣做，我們會過上快樂、健康的生活。點明主旨，突出主題。