Question

【題目】作文

請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給圖片,向你朋友介紹做蘋(píng)果奶昔的過(guò)程,詞數(shù)不少于60。

參考詞匯：蘋(píng)果奶昔apple milk shake；削皮 peel；攪拌機(jī)blender

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Answer 1

【答案】Do you like drinking apple milk shake? Do you know how to make it? Now let me tell you something about it.

First, peel the apples and cut them up. Next, put the apples and ice cream into the blender. After that, pour the milk into the blender and mix them up. Then, turn on the blender for about two minutes. Finally, pour the apple milk shake in a glass and drink it.

Now you can have a try.

【解析】

寫(xiě)作思路：本篇作文是要介紹做蘋(píng)果奶昔的過(guò)程，所以需要開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，說(shuō)明本篇作文的主要內(nèi)容，第二段主要介紹制作步驟，第三段做最后的總結(jié)。注意中間制作步驟要有條理有次序，可以用到first…next… then…等表示次序的詞。

本篇文章首先以Do you like drinking apple milk shake? Do you know how to make it?以?xún)蓚�(gè)疑問(wèn)句的形式，以及Now let me tell you something about it.開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，引出自己的主要寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，自然合理，簡(jiǎn)潔明了。第二段以first…next…after that…then…finally引出五個(gè)制作步驟，peel…, put…等使用祈使句，句型使用正確。最后用Now you can have a try 作為總結(jié)，順暢自然，渾然一體。