Question

3．最近，學(xué)校校園網(wǎng)的英語論壇上，正在進行以"健康生活"為話題的大討論．下面是學(xué)生們在討論中提到的兩個實際問題．請你任選其一，從健康生活的角度談?wù)勀愕南敕ǎ?br />
內(nèi)容提示如下：
（1）Whatdo you think of the problem？
（2）What'syour advice？
要求：
（1）中心突出，語義連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范；
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名；
（3）詞數(shù)在80詞左右．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是根據(jù)圖畫中提到的兩個實際問題．請你任選其一，從健康生活的角度談?wù)勀愕南敕�，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、二人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．描述圖畫；睡眠問題和體重增加問題
2．你的看法
3．你的建議
 
常用到的重點短語：
because of 因為
have difficulty in 在某方面有困難
make sb+adj 讓某人怎樣
had better do sth 最好做某事
try to do sth 盡力做某事

【高分句型】
1．①As we all know，②because of the pressure of heavy schoolwork，many of us don't get ③as much sleep as we should do．
①As we all know正如我們所知道的
②because of 因為，of是介詞，后接名詞代詞或動名詞．
③as…as 表示與…一樣．
2．①If you're worried about it，②you'd better ask your teacher，your friends or your parents for help．
①if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．be worried about 擔(dān)心…
②had better do sth 最好做某事，ask sb for help 尋求某人的幫助
3．Get a good sleep tonight，and you'll be at your best tomorrow．
祈使句+and+陳述句，在這里祈使句相當(dāng)于if 引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句（但此時去掉and）

解答 As we all know，because of the pressure of heavy schoolwork，many of us don't get as much sleep as we should do．【高分句型】And some of us even have difficulty in sleeping．（睡眠問題）This can make us nervous and slower at school．（我的看法）
In my opinion，we should take schoolwork in a relaxed way．If you're worried about it，you'd better ask your teacher，your friends or your parents for help．【高分句型】You may try to make a proper bedtime or get a book to read before sleep．Besides，doing some sports can also do good to you．（建議）
Get a good sleep tonight，and you'll be at your best tomorrow．【高分句型】

點評 這是一篇圖畫作文．本文所給圖畫意思表達明確，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來．動筆前要認真領(lǐng)會圖畫內(nèi)涵，概括要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．寫作中要注意人稱、時態(tài)語的搭配及主謂一致問題．同時注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．