Question

7．Emily將她的煩惱寫在了博客上并征求大家的建議．請了解她的煩惱并寫出你（Chen Lin-from Dongying）的建議，要求字數(shù)在100詞左右，建議的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總字數(shù)．
建議應包括：（1）孩子應尊重父母（2）父母經(jīng)驗豐富（3）父母的要求是對你的成長有好處的（4）…（5）多同父母交流溝通．
Possible new words：respect v & n．尊重；  responsible adj．有責任感的；
demand v．& n．要求
Here are Emily's problems on the Blog：
My problem is my parents．They never stop going on about（嘮叨） how I should keep my room clean，keep my hair tidy and wear smart clothes．They even make me do the washing-up after dinner every night!None of my friends have got such terrible parents．What should I do？
Emily，USA
Hi，Emily．I think it's lucky for you to have such good parents．You should understand and respect them，and do what they ask you to do．They have richer experience and better advice for young people．As your parents，they surely hope you become an excellent person．Their demands are helpful for your growing up．
Every member should be responsible and do something for the family．So you should do what you can do，such as keep your room clean and do the washing-up．Remember：Learning by doing．
You should keep your hair tidy and wear smart clothes．Teenagers should look like teenagers．
Anyway，if you have any problems，just talk with your parents．
Chen Lin，Dongying．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是對朋友在生活中遇見的煩惱提出建議．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第二人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
（1）孩子應尊重父母（2）父母經(jīng)驗豐富（3）父母的要求是對你的成長有好處的（4）其他（5）多同父母交流溝通．

常用到的重點短語：
it's adj for sb to do sth對某人而言做某事是怎么樣的
are helpful for對…有用
such as 例如
keep sb/sth+adj保持某人某物怎么樣
Learning by doing從做中學
anyway無論如何
高分句型：
1． I think①②it's lucky for you to have such good parents．
①省略了that的賓語從句，作為think的賓語．
②it's adj for sb to do sth對某人而言做某事是怎么樣的，it作為形式主語，to do sth做真正主語．
2．①Anyway，②if you have any problems，just talk with your parents．
①anyway無論如何，副詞．
②if 引導的條件狀語從句，主句是祈使句，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時代替一般將來時．

解答 Hi，Emily．I think it's lucky for you to have such good parents（高分句型）．You should understand and respect them，and do what they ask you to do．（尊重父母）They have richer experience and better advice for young people．（父母經(jīng)驗豐富）As your parents，they surely hope you become an excellent person．Their demands are helpful for your growing up．（父母的要求是對你的成長有好處的）Every member should be responsible and do something for the family．So you should do what you can do，such as keep your room clean and do the washing-up．Remember：Learning by doing．You should keep your hair tidy and wear smart clothes．Teenagers should look like teenagers．（其他）
 Anyway，if you have any problems，just talk with your parents．（高分句型）（多同父母交流溝通）
Chen Lin，Dongying

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