Question

15．根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的短文．所給英文提示詞語僅供選用．請不要寫出你的校名和姓名．
在成長過程中，你應(yīng)該得到了許多關(guān)心、愛護和幫助．它們或許來自父母，來自老師，或許來自朋友，甚至是陌生人．你肯定心存感激．現(xiàn)在英語園地正開展以"Thank You"為主題的征文活動，請你根據(jù)所給問題寫一篇稿件，參與此項活動．
提示詞語：help，teach，patient，encourage
1．Who do you want to thank？Your father？Mother？Teacher？Friend？Or…？
2．Why do you want to thank him/her？
3．What will you do to thank him/her？
In my life，many people helped me．I want to thank my mother because she helped me a lot．When I was ill，she looked after me patiently．When I failed in my exam，she encouraged me not to give it up．
When I was in trouble，she tried to help me work it out．My mother is busy every day．She is very tired after work．I think I should study hard and try my best to help her do more housework in my spare time．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以"Thank You"為主題談?wù)勀阆胍�感謝的人和感謝的原因．時態(tài)主要為一般過去時．人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1你想要感謝誰？
2為什么要感謝他/她？
3怎樣去感謝？
常用到的重點短語：
look after照顧
encourage sb to do sth鼓勵某人做某事
give up 放棄
work out解決…
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
【高分句型】
1．①When I failed in my exam，she ②encouraged me not to ③give it up．
①when引導的時間狀語從句
②encourage sb not to do sth鼓勵某人不做某事
③give up 放棄
2．I think ①I should study hard and ②try my best to ③help her do more housework ④in my spare time．
①think是省略了that的賓語從句．
②try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
③help sb do sth幫助某人做某事
④in one's spare time在某人空閑時

解答 In my life，many people helped me．I want to thank my mother because she helped me a lot．（感謝媽媽和為什么）
When I was ill，she looked after me patiently．When I failed in my exam，she encouraged me not to give it up．【高分句型】
When I was in trouble，she tried to help me work it out．（媽媽對我的關(guān)愛）
My mother is busy every day．She is very tired after work．I think I should study hard and try my best to help her do more housework in my spare time．【高分句型】（怎樣感謝）

點評 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點提示運用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達習慣．