Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（滿分15分）

假設(shè)你是Linda，你們學(xué)校志愿者協(xié)會(huì)招募新成員，打算在假期到本市兒童醫(yī)院組織志愿者活動(dòng)。你決定加入他們，去參加這個(gè)志愿者活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一份申請(qǐng)信。

注意：1. 文中必須包括提示中的要點(diǎn)，并作適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充；

2. 80詞左右（文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

Dear Chairman,

I’m Linda, a student from Class Five, Grade Eight. I know you need new members for your volunteer group and I want to be one of them.

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Yours,

Linda

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Chairman,

I’m Linda, a student from Class Five, Grade Eight. I know you need new members for your volunteer group and I want to be one of them.

I love kids and I really hope they can feel better with my help. Can I go to Children’s Hospital to be a volunteer during this vacation? I will try my best to help the kids and cheer them up by telling them funny stories. I think volunteering is great. And we should always think about people around us.

I hope I can be a member of your volunteer group. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Linda.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，題目中已經(jīng)給出了很多信息和要點(diǎn)。在寫作時(shí)，要注意審題，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。從題目可知，這篇文章是學(xué)校志愿者協(xié)會(huì)招募新成員，要求寫的一封申請(qǐng)信，所以要用第一人稱寫，可以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。在組織語言的時(shí)候，要注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性。句子要完整，表達(dá)要清晰，句子之間要流暢。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章緊扣材料，內(nèi)容完整，表達(dá)清晰，整體通順流暢。里面不乏好的短語和句子。文中用到了一些好的句式 I know you need new members for your volunteer group and I want to be one of them.；I will try my best to help the kids and cheer them up by telling them funny stories也讓文章增色不少。