Question

7．時間過得飛快，似乎幾個月前才進(jìn)入初三，現(xiàn)在中考（Senior High School Entrance Examination）卻近在眼前．請以"Are we ready for the Senior High School Entrance Examination？"為題，用英語寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1．你發(fā)現(xiàn)老師現(xiàn)在上課語速很快．由于有太多的作業(yè)和考試，學(xué)生沒有足夠的時間來進(jìn)行課外活動；
2．有的同學(xué)以前學(xué)習(xí)不太努力，但現(xiàn)在他們已經(jīng)意識到這次考試的重要性，并且全身
心投入到學(xué)習(xí)中去；
3．你在這最后一個月里的打算和安排，…
注意：
1．短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順、意思連貫；
2．第3要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2～3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3．詞數(shù)80個左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Are we ready for the Senior High School Entrance Examination？
How times flies!It seemed that we began my grade three only a few months ago，but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming soon!                                            
I'm sure we will do well in the coming exam if we try our best!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：We have so much homework and exams that we don't have enough time for after-school activities．so是副詞，與形容詞或副詞連用，其結(jié)構(gòu)是：so+adj．（adv．）+that從句．注意：當(dāng)名詞前面有many，much，few，little等表示數(shù)量多少的限定詞時，應(yīng)該用so，而不能用such．如：There were so many people in the street watching the fire that firefighters could not get close to the building．街上圍觀大火的人太多了，消防隊(duì)員無法靠近大樓．
句型二：Some students didn't study hard before，but now they have realized the importance of the exam and have put all their effort into their study一些同學(xué)以前學(xué)習(xí)不太努力，但現(xiàn)在他們已經(jīng)意識到這次考試的重要性．前后形成強(qiáng)烈鮮明的對比，使文章表達(dá)的意思更加清晰明朗．

解答 Are we ready for the Senior High School Entrance Examination？
How times flies!It seemed that we began my grade three only a few months ago，but the SeniorHigh School Entrance Examination is coming soon!I find the teachers speak more quickly in class now，and we have so much homework and exams that we don't have enough time for after-school activities．（高分句型一：用so…that…固定短語來說明沒有進(jìn)行課外活動的原因）Some students didn't study hard before，but now they have realized the importance of the exam and have put all their effort into study．（高分句型二：用表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的詞but使前后形成強(qiáng)烈鮮明的對比，文章意思也更加清晰明朗．）In the last month，I'll listen carefully inclass and pay more attention to details，and it's also important for us to keepa balance between study and rest． I'm sure we will do well in the coming exam if we try ourbest!（表明信心和愿望）
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點(diǎn)評 本文是一篇議論文，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，開頭結(jié)尾相呼應(yīng)．開頭指出現(xiàn)中考就要到了對于學(xué)生有一些問題，我們應(yīng)該怎么樣準(zhǔn)備升入高中．so…that…，have put all their effort into their study這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少．最后在說和孩子做朋友與文章開頭相呼應(yīng)．考生需根據(jù)所提供的信息提煉文章的寫作主題，需了解寫作要點(diǎn)及寫作意圖，仔細(xì)構(gòu)思寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．