Question

20．初中階段的學(xué)習(xí)和生活即將結(jié)束，你的老師陪伴你度過了三年的校園生活．回顧其中的許多點點滴滴，久久不能忘記．假如你是李磊，請你給你的某一位教師寫封信，和他（她）說說感激的心里話．
注意：書寫規(guī)范；語句連貫；表達準(zhǔn)確；80詞左右．
提示詞：work hard，be strict with，interesting，get along well with，encourage，brave，make much progress，…
Dear my teacher，
Leaving you-lovely junior school life，I have so many words from my heart to say．
                                                                                
Thank you again for what you've done for us!All the best to you!
Yours，
Li Lei．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．因為你的課非常生動有趣，對我們來說學(xué)好英語很簡單有趣．
句中"because your class is very interesting and lively"為原因狀語從句，主句為"it is+形容詞+for sb to do sth 對某人來說做某事…"結(jié)構(gòu)．
高分句型二：
When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．當(dāng)我考試失敗的時候，你鼓勵我不斷努力．
句中"When I failed in an exam"為條件狀語從句，主句"you encouraged me to keep trying"中有短語"encourage sb to do sth 鼓勵某人做某事"、"keep doing sth 一直做某事"．

解答 Dear my teacher，
Leaving you-lovely junior school life，I have so many words from my heart to say．I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago．You always work hard and treat us well．You are strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly．It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．【高分句型一】
During my school life，we can get along well with each other．When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．（回憶初中生活）
Because of your help，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much
Thank you again for what you've done for us!All the best to you!（表示感謝）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Lei

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．