【題目】書面表達(dá) （本大題共10分）

假如你是Simon, 你購(gòu)買了某公司生產(chǎn)的手機(jī)，但出現(xiàn)故障。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，給該公司售后服務(wù)部寫一封電子郵件。

存在問題

1. 買了兩個(gè)半月。 花了1000多元錢。

2. 上周出現(xiàn)問題。不能發(fā)短信，也不能打電話。

3. 前幾天去店里讓人修理，被告知不值得維修。換新手機(jī)至少等三個(gè)月。

感受和要求

1. I feel…

2. I hope…

注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2.短文應(yīng)把表格中所示內(nèi)容表達(dá)完整，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整；

3.省略部分作2-3句合理發(fā)揮，使條理清晰，內(nèi)容完整，意思連貫。

I am writing to you for the mobile phone by your company.

______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

Thank you for your attention.

Yours sincerely

Simon

【答案】

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you for the mobile phone by your company.

I have had it for two and a half months. It cost me more than one thousand yuan. But it went wrong last week. I couldn’t send text messages and I couldn’t make phone calls, either. I had it fixed in the shop the other day. I was told that it was not worth fixing. If I want to change a new one, I need to wait for at least three months. I feel sorry that I have bought a mobile phone like this. I hope to have a new one, or I want my money back.

Thank you for your attention.

Yours sincerely

Simon

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。所給材料內(nèi)容比較詳細(xì)，層次清楚，我們要做的就是用英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文時(shí)要注意書信格式及語言，注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題，同時(shí)保持上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn): 這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，格式正確，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上使用了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。同時(shí)，文章還使用了一些常用的句式和短語，這為文章增色不少。

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