Question

【題目】假如你們外教想讓你介紹你的兩個好朋友的飲食情況，請你根據(jù)下面表格中的信息提示，用英語寫一篇短文介紹他們喜歡和不喜歡的食物，并對他們的飲食情況進行評價。

名字	喜歡的食物	不喜歡的食物
Bob	雞肉，橙子，香蕉，冰激凌	胡蘿卜
Jim	胡蘿卜，西紅柿，梨，蘋果	冰激凌

要求：60詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

I have two good friends. They are Bob and Jim.

Answer 1

【答案】I have two good friends. They are Bob and Jim. Bob likes chicken very much. He likes oranges and bananas, too. After dinner, he always eats an ice-cream. But he doesn't like carrots.

Jim likes healthy food. He likes to eat vegetables and fruit every day. He likes carrots and tomatoes, and he likes pears and apples, too. He doesn't like ice-cream.

I think Jim has good eating habits.

【解析】本篇作文屬于圖表作文，主要介紹兩個好朋友的飲食情況。根據(jù)要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。

【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用了時態(tài)語態(tài)和主謂一致，特別是一些亮點詞句，如very much, too, after,but等，增加了邏輯關系，增強了上下文的意思連貫性，用詞準確，句子通順。