Question

3．以My Perfect Neighbourhood 為題，寫一篇80字左右的短文．
要求：書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔．
My Perfect Neighbourhood
I'm living in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，and I have been living here for years．It's on the north of my school．There are about 100 families．I live on the eighth floor of a high bilding with my parents．There are many trees and flowers near the neighborhood，The air is fresh，people can live more healthily．I always take a walk in it．It's not far from the center of the city，The bus ride only takes half an hour．There is a zoo near here，and many tourists come here to have a visit．The best thing is my neighbors are very friendly and they help each other．Some always share their abilities on weekends．I love my neighborhood very much．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
There is a zoo near here，and many tourists come here to have a visit附近有一個動物園，很多游客來這游玩．
動詞不定式做目的狀語．
【高分句型二】
The best thing is my neighbors are very friendly and they help each other最好的事情是我的鄰居們都很友好彼此幫助，
省略了that的表語從句，與is構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)．

解答 My Perfect Neighbourhood
I'm living in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，and I have been living here for years．It's on the north of my school．There are about 100 families．（小區(qū)位置和規(guī)模）I live on the eighth floor of a high bilding with my parents．There are many trees and flowers near the neighborhood，The air is fresh，people can live more healthily．（空氣環(huán)境）I always take a walk in it．It's not far from the center of the city，The bus ride only takes half an hour．There is a zoo near here，and many tourists come here to have a visit．（交通）【高分句型一】The best thing is my neighbors are very friendly and they help each other．【高分句型二】Some always share their abilities on weekends．（鄰里相處）I love my neighborhood very much．（感受）

點評 能夠根據(jù)提示進行書面表達，能夠圍繞主題準確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達自己的思想，進而完成寫作任務．