Question

5．三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束了，你一定會有很多的感慨，也許是對初中生活的留戀，也許是對師恩的難忘，也許是對友誼的珍惜，又或許是對未來的憧憬…假如在畢業(yè)典禮上讓你發(fā)言，你會說出怎樣的畢業(yè)感言呢？
短文的開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，請寫出80詞左右的發(fā)言稿．
Dear teachers and classmates，
How time flies!We have finished three-years'study here．…
（注意：短文中請勿使用真實(shí)姓名、地點(diǎn)或所在學(xué)校名稱．）
Dear teachers and classmates
How time flies!We have finished three-years'study here．And I have changed a lot during these years．（開篇點(diǎn)題）
On one hand，I wasn't good at learning English at first．When my English teacher learnt about that，she taught me how to memorize new words and to read as many passages as possible．【高分句型一】Soon I made great progress and became interested in English．（學(xué)習(xí)的變化）
On the other hand，I was too weak to do much exercise in the past．【高分句型二】But with the help of the teachers and classmates，I do exercise whenever I am free．And now I can run very fast and I'm also good at playing basketball like other boys．（生活的變化）
Thanks to the middle school life，I have changed so much!Thanks to the teachers and classmates，I have learnt so much!Never will I forget the valuable middle school life．（表達(dá)感恩之情）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
When my English teacher learnt about that，she taught me how to memorize new words and to read as many passages as possible．
句中"When my English teacher learnt about that"為時(shí)間狀語從句，句中短語有："learn about 了解"、"as…as possible  盡可能地…"．這句話意為：當(dāng)我的英語老師了解到這些，她教我怎么記新單詞并讓我盡可能地多讀短文．
高分句型二：
On the other hand，I was too weak to do much exercise in the past．
句中使用短語有"on the other hand 另一方面"、"too…to…太…而不能…"．這句話意為：另一方面，過去我太虛弱了而不能多做運(yùn)動．

解答 Dear teachers and classmates，
How time flies!We have finished three-years'study here．And I have changed a lot during these years．（開篇點(diǎn)題）
On one hand，I wasn't good at learning English at first．When my English teacher learnt about that，she taught me how to memorize new words and to read as many passages as possible．【高分句型一】Soon I made great progress and became interested in English．（學(xué)習(xí)的變化）
On the other hand，I was too weak to do much exercise in the past．【高分句型二】But with the help of the teachers and classmates，I do exercise whenever I am free．And now I can run very fast and I'm also good at playing basketball like other boys．（生活的變化）
Thanks to the middle school life，I have changed so much!Thanks to the teachers and classmates，I have learnt so much!Never will I forget the valuable middle school life．（表達(dá)感恩之情）

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