Question

8．請(qǐng)根據(jù)雜志KIDVOICE的內(nèi)容，以"Kids and Learning"為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，發(fā)表你的看法．

KIDS HAVE AN OPINION TOO! Hi!I'm Sigmund Friend，the editor （編輯） of a new magazine KIDVOICE． We like hearing from kids．We know you've got things to say． We want to hear from you． Here is a topic you might have an opinion about…

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1．對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．
Kids and LearningAll kids want to be good at learning．                                 

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文，讓我們寫一篇關(guān)于kids and learning的作文，這需要我們根據(jù)提示信息，并發(fā)揮我們的思維力和創(chuàng)造力，對(duì)這些內(nèi)容逐一陳述．有題目可知，寫這篇作文應(yīng)用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．內(nèi)容包括：第一部分闡述觀點(diǎn)，孩子是否擅長(zhǎng)學(xué)習(xí)；第二部分，孩子應(yīng)如何處理好學(xué)習(xí)與玩之間的關(guān)系．
重要的短語(yǔ)和句型：
be good at擅長(zhǎng)
just as a saying goes正如諺語(yǔ)所說
have a good knowledge of對(duì)．有個(gè)很好的了解
 All in all，only when we balance the relation between playing and learning，can we be good at learning總之，只有處理好了學(xué)習(xí)與玩耍的關(guān)系才能學(xué)習(xí)好 only when…can we…只有當(dāng)…我們才會(huì)…倒裝句型
Just as the saying goes"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy"，只學(xué)習(xí)不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻  just as 正如…；適當(dāng)引用諺語(yǔ)會(huì)得高分

解答 參考答案：
Kids and Learning
    All kids want to be good at learning．Some children are good at learning，but some children are good at playing，and they are not good at learning，why？This is because some children know how to balance learning and studying．＜闡述觀點(diǎn)＞
    First，just as the saying goes"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy"，＜諺語(yǔ)開頭，易得高分＞a good learner should know to play properly，if he or she plays happily，he will try to learning well．Besides，all learning decrease the interest of study．Second，students should make a proper time list，and try to follow the list．Last，parents and teachers should give tips to the students so that students can have a good knowledge of the study．＜觀點(diǎn)層層遞進(jìn)＞
 All in all，only when we balance the relation between playing and learning，can we be good at learning．＜高分句型＞

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫圖畫作文時(shí)，我們最好不要遺漏圖畫所給的重要信息，注意不要生搬硬套，注意語(yǔ)句的連貫與銜接．行文要注意簡(jiǎn)化，不要抱沓冗長(zhǎng)，最好能夠?qū)懚痰暮?jiǎn)單句，這樣比較能夠得分，同時(shí)注意寫作文時(shí)使用一定的連接詞，比如，what's more  last but not the least等等．寫作文完成時(shí)要注意檢查修改，以避免遺漏，如果有條件的話，最好能夠先打個(gè)草稿，再抄到答題紙上，這樣更容易得高分．最后，注意去使用一些句型和短語(yǔ)，使整篇短文意思連貫流暢，方能成就一篇好作文