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17．每當(dāng)大型考試來臨，同學(xué)們都會表現(xiàn)出不同程度的緊張．請你以"How to relax before exams"為題寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓θ绾尉徑饪荚嚱箲]情緒的建議．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)

分析	考試焦慮的危害
建議	●端正考試態(tài)度，制定科學(xué)的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃； ●聽聽音樂，放松心情； （請自擬兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容） ●… ●…

注意：（1）必須包含表格中的所有提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（2）詞數(shù)90左右．文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
（3）詞匯提示：nervousness  n．焦慮　attitude  n．態(tài)度 scientific  adj．科學(xué)的
How to Relax before Exams
Many of us feel somehow nervous whenever we are taking an important exam．
                                                             
Follow my advice and you will enjoy your school life．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
So it's necessary for us students to learn to relax所以對于我們學(xué)生學(xué)會放松是必須的．
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．
【高分句型二】
I think it's very important to have a right attitude towards exams我認(rèn)為對于考試有一個(gè)正確的態(tài)度是很重要的．
think后是省略that的賓語從句．

解答 How to Relax before Exams
Many of us feel somehow nervous whenever we are taking an important exam．
Nervousness not only does harm to our health but also it's bad for our studies（分析）．So it's necessary for us students to learn to relax．【高分句型二】I think it's very important to have a right attitude towards exams．【高分句型二】Exams are only a way of checking what we have learned．Therefore，there is no need to worry too much about the results of the exams．Before an exam，making a scientific study plan and keeping a peaceful mind can help to reduce the stress from the exam．We can also relax ourselves by listening to music．We can also do sports，such as playing balls，climbing mountains and taking a walk．Besides，enough sleep and a balanced diet will work as well．（建議）
Follow my advice and you will enjoy your school life．

點(diǎn)評 以提綱提供情景的作文．這種形式本身的要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)很明確，重點(diǎn)也很突出，只要把各個(gè)提綱加以發(fā)揮，注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．