Question

【題目】書面表達

中國日報（China Daily）決定舉行一次以“我的筆友”為題的英語征文比賽。假如你的筆友是David，請結(jié)合以下的要點寫一篇100字左右的短文，可適當發(fā)揮。文章的開頭已給出，不計入字數(shù)。

身份	15歲，八年級，就讀于林地學(xué)校(Woodland School),既是我的偶像又是我的好友。
外貌	棕色的頭發(fā)，明亮而笑瞇瞇的眼睛，是班里的尖子生。
性格	（1）幽默，---- （2） 慷慨，----
學(xué)習(xí)	在班上學(xué)習(xí)最刻苦。法語說得相當好�？偸钦J真聆聽同學(xué)的問題，并主動給他們提供幫助。
愛好	1.喜愛旅行�；ㄔS多時間環(huán)游世界。去年游覽了長城，世界上最大的城市廣場---天安門廣場，還去了中國的其他名勝。
	2.喜歡自己動手制作,并閱讀了很多有關(guān)DIY的書。上個月，自己為母親制作了一張帶有玫瑰花的卡片。
理想	長大后想----， 因為---- ----（自由發(fā)揮一句）

My penfriend

I want to tell you about my penfriend named David. ____________

Answer 1

【答案】My penfriend

I want to tell you about my penfriend named David. He is 15 years old. He is in Grade eight in woodland school. He is both my idol and good friend. He has brown hair and bright, smiling eyes. He is the top student in the class. He is both humorous and generous. He studies hardest in his class. He speaks French quite well. He always listens to his classmates' questions carefully and offers them help .

David loves traveling and spends much time traveling around the world. Last year, he visited the Great Wall, Tian'anmen Square---the largest city square in the world, and other places of interest in China. In addition, he also likes to make his own, and reads a lot of books about DIY. Last month, he made a card with roses for his mother.

He wants to be a pilot when he grows up, because he wants to get around the world.

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如want to do，both…and，listen to，offer them help，like to do，spend much time doing，around the world，places of interest，in addition，a lot of，grow up等。而He always listens to his classmates' questions carefully and offers them help on his own initiative./ In addition, he also likes to make his own, and reads a lot of books about DIY.等并列句和He wants to be a pilot when he grows up, because he wants to get around the world.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。