Question

【題目】根據(jù)提示，請(qǐng)以My Life in Ten Years 為題寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文。

My Life in Ten Years

Answer 1

【答案】My life in ten years

In ten years, I think I’ll be a reporter. I would like to work in BeiJing because I will probably find a better job there.I will meet a lot of interesting and famous people and go to other places on business.I will live in an apartment where I can enjoy talks with my sister，because I don’t like living alone. Also I am going to learn about news, history, geography and so on during the college.

So in ten years, my dream of being a reporter will hopefully come true and I can be working as a reporter.Until then, I will have many different pets, such as a pet cat. I think I will be doing shopping with my sister as long as I have time. During my vacation I will travel to London. So my life in ten years will be better and better.

Do you believe the life in ten years of mine is so wonderful?

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如would like to do，a lot of，on business，live in，enjoy sth.，talk with，be going to，come true，as a reporter，do shopping，as long as，go to travel，be better and better等。而I would like to work in BeiJing because I will probably find a better job there./ I will live in an apartment where I can enjoy talks with my sister，because I don’t like living alone. / I think I will be doing shopping with my sister as long as I have time.等多種復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。