Question

【題目】請你根據(jù)下面提示,以A landslide（山崩）為題, 寫一篇70詞左右的短文（開頭已給出, 不計入總詞數(shù)）。
①上周一早上, 在連續(xù)下了兩天大雨之后發(fā)生了山崩(landslide)。
②我和媽媽在家, 爸爸下午回來。雨很大。他叫我和媽媽趕快帶傘離開。
③就在那時, 房子開始搖晃, 我們非常害怕, 迅速跑開了。
④第二天上午回家時, 我們發(fā)現(xiàn)房子沒有了, 到處是碎玻璃和磚塊, 我們感到很悲傷。
A landslide
Last Monday morning, ……

Answer 1

【答案】A landslide
Last Monday morning, after two days' heavy rain, a landslide happened. I was at home with my mother. Father came back in the afternoon. It was raining heavily/hard. He asked us to leave quickly with umbrellas. Just then, the house started to shake. We were very afraid and ran away quickly.
The following morning, we went back home. We found that there was no house at all. There were only pieces of glass and bricks everywhere. We felt very sad.
【解析】這是以提綱提供情景的命題作文。這種形式本身的要點已經(jīng)很明確，重點也很突出，只要把各個提綱加以發(fā)揮，注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就 不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點。開篇以Last Monday開頭，奠定了文章用一般過去時，注意單詞的過去式拼寫。