Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

假如你參加了學(xué)校組織的“走近鄉(xiāng)村”寒假社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)要求，向某英語網(wǎng)站投稿，分享活動(dòng)經(jīng)歷。

要求：1.80~120詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

參考信息：

Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine!

Answer 1

【答案】Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine.

During the winter vacation, my classmates and I joined in the school activity “Get close to the countryside”.

We live in the famers’ homes. Their great living conditions surprised us a lot. Do you know where vegetables come from? We got the answer when working with the farmers. Besides, we learned about other plants and some farm animals. How interesting!

We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldn’t get from books before, and felt the wonderful changes of the countryside. We realized how hard the farmers worked and decided to save food. We were happy to see the farmers’ life was getting better and better.

We really hope we’ll have another activity like that this winter vacation!

【解析】

本文屬于一篇圖表作文，根據(jù)表格提供的信息來介紹“走近鄉(xiāng)村”寒假社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)的經(jīng)歷。人稱為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料確定寫作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，既要寫活動(dòng)的過程，又要總結(jié)活動(dòng)感受與收獲。并補(bǔ)充兩條個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。多種句式交叉使用來豐富文章的文采。高分句型：1.We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldn’t get from books before. 我們經(jīng)歷了農(nóng)村的生活，學(xué)到了一些我們以前從書中得不到的東西。that we couldn’t get from books before.是定語從句，修飾不定代詞something。2. We really hope we’ll have another activity like that this winter vacation! 我們真的希望今年寒假還能有這樣的活動(dòng)！hope后面是省略that的賓語從句。