Question

【題目】每個人身邊都有朋友，請用英語寫一篇短文，介紹你的朋友王麗。（80詞左右）

外貌：高高瘦瘦的女孩，黑色的長發(fā)，戴著眼鏡，喜歡穿牛仔褲。

性格：對人友善，樂于助人，但和陌生人在一感到緊張。

愛好：喜歡聽音樂，尤其是流行歌曲，還喜歡運動。

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Answer 1

【答案】I have a friend.Her name is Wang Li.

She is a tall and thin girl with long black hair and she wears glasses. She likes wearing jeans. Wang Li is very friendly to others and she is always ready to help others. She often feels nervous when she is with strangers. I think she is lovely. She likes listening to music, especially pop music and she likes sports as well.

【解析】

本文屬于材料作文，介紹你的朋友王麗。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。

亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如wear glasses, with, be friendly to, be ready to, especially以及as well等。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。