Question

【題目】假設(shè)某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)開展關(guān)于青少年生活狀況的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提示的要點(diǎn)，以Teenagers need to change為題，用英語為該報(bào)寫一篇短文，簡(jiǎn)述青少年生活狀況并提出建議。

現(xiàn)狀	學(xué)習(xí)	學(xué)業(yè)繁重；考前擔(dān)憂（或自擬內(nèi)容）
	飲食	零食不斷；拒絕果蔬（或自擬內(nèi)容）
	出行	無視交規(guī)；亂丟垃圾（或自擬內(nèi)容）
	其它	（請(qǐng)考生自擬一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容）
建議	如何改變現(xiàn)狀（請(qǐng)考生各自擬一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容）

注意：

1. 表達(dá)中必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。

2. 詞數(shù)90左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3. 表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。

Teenagers need to change

Nowadays, teenagers have plenty of problems in their everyday lives.__________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, teenagers have plenty of problems in their everyday lives. They have too much homework to do both at school and at home, others may worry about their exams. Their eating habits are not good, some of them often eat snacks, and refuse to eat vegetables and fruits. I know some teenagers don’t obey the traffic rules and throw rubbish everywhere when they go out. Even worse, some of them are crazy about playing computer games. I think teenagers should think of ways to deal with these problems. Firstly, they should make a plan for study and find time to relax as much as possible. Secondly, they must eat healthy food to keep healthy. Thirdly, in order to be safe and protect the environment, they must obey the traffic rules and stop throwing the rubbish. At last, in my opinion, they should spend less time in front of the computer in their free time, go out to take some exercise, play some sports and visit some friends. In a word, they must develop a healthy lifestyle.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)提綱可知，人稱為第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。要求語句通順、意思連貫。文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文按照寫作要求，根據(jù)漢語提示，用簡(jiǎn)潔的語言，準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出漢語意思，語言流暢。本文寫作思路清晰，特別是一些副詞的運(yùn)用，比如：Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly,等，使語意更加連貫，層次分明。并依據(jù)要求，提出了自己的觀點(diǎn)In a word, they must develop a healthy lifestyle.