Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。 (15分)

以“My friend Tom”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，不少于60個(gè)詞。請(qǐng)充分發(fā)揮你的想象力，使短文的語(yǔ)言流暢.連貫。

1. 湯姆是一個(gè)好學(xué)生。他13歲，高而瘦并戴著眼鏡的男孩子。他樂(lè)意助人，昨天他幫助了邁克數(shù)學(xué)。

2. 湯姆勤奮學(xué)習(xí)，各門(mén)功課都好。 他數(shù)學(xué)和英語(yǔ)學(xué)得最好。他每天早晨讀英語(yǔ)和語(yǔ)文。

3. 他很健康，他經(jīng)常吃健康食品并一周鍛煉三次。他也喜歡打籃球和游泳。

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Answer 1

【答案】

My best friend is Tom. He is a good student. He’s 13 years old. He is both tall and thin. He usually wears small and round glasses. He is always ready to help others. Yesterday he helped Mike to learn English. Tom is a hard-working boy, he does well in all his subjects, especially English and math. He reads English and Chinese every morning. Tom is very healthy, he often eats healthy food and exercises three times a week. And he also likes playing basketball and swimming.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求以My friend Tom為題，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，而且要做到表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)可知，本文主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)書(shū)寫(xiě)，只有一個(gè)一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)的句子。可以用第三人稱(chēng)。要注意把每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)出來(lái)，不要遺漏任何一個(gè)，并且要圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了自己的朋友Tom，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)全面。一個(gè)一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)的句子把握的也比較準(zhǔn)確。該文中以下幾個(gè)句子用得很好。He is always ready to help others. Tom is a hard-working boy, he does well in all his subjects, especially English and math.