Question

8．某英語學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng)站向廣大中學(xué)生征稿，談?wù)勅绾味冗^一個有意義的假期．請你根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容提示，用英語寫一篇暑假計劃．要求：

暑假計劃內(nèi)容

1．做自己喜歡的運動

2．多讀書

3．參與家務(wù)勞動

4．旅游

5．其它

（1）對于每項計劃，請簡要闡述理由；
（2）可補充一條自己的小計劃；
（3）100詞左右．開頭以給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
My Summer Holiday Plan
My summer holidays are coming soon．Here are some plans for my holidays．First，I want to do my favourite sport，basketball，to keep healthy．In Grade Three，I was too busy to read books．Next I plan to spend more time in reading to get ready for the life of senior middle school．My parents always take good care of me，so I will help my parents with the housework at home during the holidays．I also hope to visit the World Expe 2010 Shanghai China with my parents．I think it's a good chance to know more about different oountries all over the world．
I'm looking forward to my colourful holidays．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勅绾味冗^一個有意義的假期．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．做自己喜歡的運動
2．多讀書
3．參與家務(wù)勞動
4．旅游
5．其它
常用到的重點短語：
too+adj+to do sth 太…而不能
plan to do sth 計劃做某事
spend+時間+in doing sth 花時間做某事
take care of 照顧
help sb with sth 幫助某人做某事
look forward to期待
【高分句型】
1．In Grade Three，I was too busy to read books．
too+adj+to do sth 太…而不能
2．Next I ①plan to spend more time in reading ②to get ready for the life of senior middle school．
①plan to do sth 計劃做某事
②動詞不定式做目的狀語．get ready for 為…做準(zhǔn)備
3．I think①②it's a good chance to know more about different oountries③all over the world．
①think后是省略了that的賓語從句．
②it是形式主語，動詞不定式是真正主語．know about 了解
③all over the world全世界

解答 My Summer Holiday Plan
        My summer holidays are coming soon．Here are some plans for my holidays．First，I want to do my favourite sport，basketball，to keep healthy．（做自己喜歡的運動）In Grade Three，I was too busy to read books．【高分句型】Next I plan to spend more time in reading to get ready for the life of senior middle school【高分句型】（多讀書）．My parents always take good care of me，so I will help my parents with the housework at home during the holidays．（參與家務(wù)勞動）I also hope to visit the World Expo 2010 Shanghai China with my parents．（旅游）I think it's a good chance to know more about different countries all over the world．【高分句型】（其它）
  I'm looking forward to my colourful holidays．（期待）

點評 本圖表所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是把這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達(dá)出來．動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并需有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．要注意句式的多樣性，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂觅e語從句，轉(zhuǎn)折詞however，連詞and等．考生可在作文之前對每部分列出大致的提綱，做到主題明確，條理清楚．可以根據(jù)所給提綱或已知信息列出每段的主題句，為全文的展開做好鋪墊．注意行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范，不要出現(xiàn)一些諸如語法或詞匯的錯誤．