Question

16．書面表達(dá)．
現(xiàn)在國家放開二胎生育，對于是否生育二胎許多人存在不同意見．請閱讀下面的漫畫，按要求用英文寫一篇短文．

Advantages	小孩不再孤獨(dú)
	分擔(dān)撫養(yǎng)老人的責(zé)任
	…
Disadvantages	經(jīng)濟(jì)壓力增大，生活質(zhì)量提升困難
	一份愛要分給兩個(gè)孩子
	…
Your opinions	（不少于兩點(diǎn)）

注意：
1．短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．考生可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫；
3．詞數(shù)90左右；
4．文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息．
參考詞匯：緩解人口老齡化ease pressure from the ageing population
Today，I'm going to talk abut a change to China's population policy．A couple can have a second child．However，different people have different opinions about this policy．
                                                 

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It is helpful to improve the balanced development of population改善人口發(fā)展平衡是有幫助的．
it is+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語．
【高分句型二】
they are too busy looking after the smaller child to look after the elder child他們太忙于照顧小孩而不能照顧大點(diǎn)的孩子．
too…to do sth太…而不能做某事

解答 Today，I'm going to talk abut a change to China's population policy．A couple can have a second child．However，different people have different opinions about this policy．Some people who support it think that a couple should have two children at least because their first child feels so lonely when they go out for their work．What's more，they can take care of the elderly together with their brothers or sisters．
For another thing，two kids will help each other，they can share things together．Learning to share things is a very important lesson for children．
In another way，the policy can ease pressure from the ageing population in China．It is helpful to improve the balanced development of population．【高分句型一】（有利的地方）
But some people refuse the policy because they think they can't afford it．They have to pay for two children's education and pocket money．It is difficult for them to improve their life．Sometimes，they are too busy looking after the smaller child to look after the elder child．【高分句型二】
The parents will have to spare more time and effort to look after their children so they can't devote themselves to their work．
Sometimes there are some fights between the kids．It often makes the parents worried．（不利之處）
In my opinions，whether a couple should have a second child or not depends on their family situation．If they can achieve a balance between their own work and their children，I think two children are perfect for a family．In a word，parents should think twice before making a decision of having a second．Only in this way，we can have a peaceful and happy family life．（我的觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評 做英語書面表達(dá)時(shí)，只要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句．最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤．