Question

【題目】 請仔細(xì)觀察下面的圖片，并根據(jù)所給提示和要求寫一篇短文。

提示：（1）What did the two boys do?

（2）What’s your advice for the boy on the right?

要求：（1）短文須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

（2）短文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。

（3）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

參考詞匯：dig, keep on (堅(jiān)持), succeed

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I can see two boys in the picture. The boy on the left _____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】例文：I can see two boys in the picture. The boy on the left kept on digging until he got the water. The boy on the right dug several holes but got nothing. He gave up halfway easily and achieved nothing. How to avoid it? Here is my advice. First, he should set a goal and give his life a sense of direction. Second, he can try his best to come over the difficulties he meets. Besides, it’s important for him to keep on his goals firmly. Only then will he succeed in the end.

【解析】

這是一篇看圖作文，描述兩個(gè)男孩做的事以及應(yīng)該給右邊男孩的建議。

結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I can see……，The boy on the right dug……，Here is……，it’s important for him to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。