Question

【題目】書面表達

幫助他人，快樂自己。李華一家常在周末去社區(qū)參加志愿者活動。假如你是李華的同學，請根據(jù)提供的信息描述他們上周六所做的事，你對他們的做法有何感想？你是否愿意參與類似的活動？說明理由。

人物	爸爸	媽媽	李華	你
活動	為鄰居修理（fix）電腦	為社區(qū)老人包粽子	教孩子下棋	……

要求：

1.所寫內容必須包括提供的所有信息，可適當發(fā)揮。

2.評價李華一家的做法：表達你的意愿，并說明理由。

3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名，校名及地點。

4. 文章80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

I am Li Hua’s classmate and I’ve known that he and his parents often go to the community centre to do some voluntary work.

Answer 1

【答案】

I am Li Hua’s classmate and I’ve known that he and his parents often go to the community centre to do some voluntary work. Last Saturday, his family went there again and did something for others. His father checked and fixed computers for neighbors. His mother made zongzi for the elderly people there. Li Hua taught some kids to play chess.

I think what his family do is meaningful. I also want to be a volunteer like Li Hua. I will clean the house for the old people.

As we know, helping others is helping ourselves. It can also bring happiness to us all.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求以李華同學的身份，介紹一下李華一家周末經(jīng)常去社區(qū)參加志愿者活動的情況以及上周六他們一家去社區(qū)的具體活動情況，并表達自己對李華一家的做法的看法。短文用第三人稱形式，經(jīng)常去社區(qū)的活動情況用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，上周六的活動用一般過去時態(tài)。表述自己的看法用第一人稱，用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。

寫作亮點：短文的第一段介紹李華一家的職業(yè)及愛好；第二段描述上周六他們全家在社區(qū)所做的志愿服務活動；第三段表明自己對李華一家行為的看法。條理清楚，層次分明。短文最后：幫助別人就是幫助我們自己，它能給我們帶來快樂。點明主旨，升華主題。