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7．近期各種選秀節(jié)目愈發(fā)火熱，有些中學(xué)生也加入了選秀的行列．英語課上，Mr．Zhang讓你們對這種現(xiàn)象進行討論．請你根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿，并在課堂上發(fā)表演說．
內(nèi)容包括：
1．有的人覺得選秀可以讓人一夜成名，讓人擁有不一樣的經(jīng)歷，讓人變得自信．
2．有的人則認(rèn)為選秀純粹是浪費時間，甚至還可能招致嘲笑．
3．你是怎么認(rèn)為的呢？
作文要求：
1．語句連貫，80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
2．不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名．
Hi，everyone!I would like to say something about the talent shows that are popular on TV these days．
Some students think the shows can make them famous．They think young people should do something different．If they have the chance to show their abilities to others，they can be more confident．They think it's very important for young people to show their abilities．Others think it's a waste of time and it's very hard for them to become successful．If they don't do well in the show，they will be laughed at．As a student，I think we should study hard and spend more time on our study．
Thanks for listening．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是針對選秀節(jié)目進行了一次討論，要求寫一篇發(fā)言稿，匯報討論結(jié)果并發(fā)表自己的看法．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．有的人覺得選秀可以讓人一夜成名，讓人擁有不一樣的經(jīng)歷，讓人變得自信．
2．有的人則認(rèn)為選秀純粹是浪費時間，甚至還可能招致嘲笑．
3．你是怎么認(rèn)為的呢？
常用到的重點短語：
make sb+adj 讓某人怎么樣
a waste of 浪費
do well in 擅長…
laugh at 嘲笑
study hard 努力學(xué)習(xí)
【高分句型】
1．They think ①②it's very important for young people to show their abilities．
①think后是省略了that的賓語從句．
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．
2．①If they don't ②do well in the show，they③will be laughed at．
①if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．
②do well in 擅長…
③一般將來時的被動語態(tài) will+be+過去分詞．laugh at 嘲笑

解答 Hi，everyone!I would like to say something about the talent shows that are popular on TV these days．
Some students think the shows can make them famous．（有的人覺得選秀可以讓人一夜成名）They think young people should do something different．If they have the chance to show their abilities to others，they can be more confident．They think it's very important for young people to show their abilities．．（讓人擁有不一樣的經(jīng)歷，讓人變得自信）【高分句型】Others think it's a waste of time and it's very hard for them to become successful．（有的人則認(rèn)為選秀純粹是浪費時間）If they don't do well in the show，they will be laughed at．【高分句型】（甚至還可能招致嘲笑）As a student，I think we should study hard and spend more time on our study．（我的看法）
Thanks for listening．

點評 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點和細(xì)節(jié)．