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14．根據(jù)以下Jeremy 去新西蘭就讀高中時填寫的表格，為他寫一份在班級見面會上的自我介紹．
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注意：1．文章須包括表格中的所以內(nèi)容，可適量拓展；
2 開頭和結(jié)束已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3 詞數(shù)：80詞左右．
Hi，everybody!
I'd like to tell you something about myself．I'm Jeremy，a 16-year-old student from China，Asia．To experience a different senior life，I come here．I like the school，for its beautiful buildings and friendly teachers and students．I still have some difficulties speaking and listening to English，so I hope you can help me out．You are the ones I'd usually like to turn to when I'm in trouble．I haven't had any friends or relatives here，but I do hope we can be good friends．I like drawing，and I hope there'll be art time for me every week．
  That's all，thanks!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
To experience a different senior life，I come here．為了體驗一種不同的高中生活，我來到這里．
動詞不定式作目的狀語．；experience 此處為動詞"體驗"．
高分句型二：
I still①have some difficulties speaking and listening to English，so I hope you can②help me out．
我仍然在說，聽英語上有一些困難，所以我希望你能幫我．
①have some difficulties （in）doing sth"在做什么事上有困難"
②help sb out幫助某人解決難題

解答 Hi，everybody!
    I'd like to tell you something about myself．I'm Jeremy，a 16-year-old student from China，Asia．To experience a different senior life，I come here．【高分句型一】I like the school，for its beautiful buildings and friendly teachers and students．I still have some difficulties speaking and listening to English，so I hope you can help me out．【高分句型二】You are the ones I'd usually like to turn to when I'm in trouble．I haven't had any friends or relatives here，but I do hope we can be good friends．I like drawing，and I hope there'll be art time for me every week．【自我介紹及希望】
That's all，thanks!

點評 考生在寫作時需明確寫作要點，注意寫作中人稱和時態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達(dá)流暢，考生在平時應(yīng)多注意�？嫉淖魑男问剑�積累相關(guān)的短語和詞匯．