Question

13．你的美國朋友Tom希望了解你和你的好友李華的情況．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示寫一篇文章向Tom 簡單介紹你和李華在外貌、性格、興趣愛好等方面的共同點(diǎn)和不同點(diǎn)．
要點(diǎn)提示：
short black hair； love to help others； like to play basketball
不同點(diǎn)：
1．Li hua is taller than me
2．I'm more outgoing than Li hua
3．I like watching movies； Li hua likes reading books．
要求：
注意：字?jǐn)?shù)70左右．已經(jīng)給出的開頭，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．                                        
Li hua is my best friend．We have a lot in common，but we still have some differences．                                                                                                                                       

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think I'm more easygoing than him．我認(rèn)為我比他外向．
think后是省略了that的賓語從句．
【高分句型二】
Even though we have differences，We are still very good friends即使我們有不同點(diǎn)，我們?nèi)匀皇呛门笥眩?br />even though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句．

解答 Li hua is my best friend．We have a lot in common，but we still have some differences．
We both have short black hair．Li hua is taller than me．Both of us like to make new friends and we also love to help other people．（共同點(diǎn)）I think I'm more easygoing than him．【高分句型一】As for hobbies，I like watching movies in my spare time while Wang Ming likes reading books．（不同點(diǎn)）But we both like to play basketball after school．
  Even though we have differences，We are still very good friends．【高分句型二】

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