Question

【題目】圖示作文：仔細(xì)觀察圖片描述，展開合理想象，然后寫一篇短文。

要求：1. 話題作文或圖示作文任選其一。

2. 詞數(shù)：80-100之間。

3. 字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

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Answer 1

【答案】Last Sunday morning, Henry told his dog to send some letters for him. It was easy for his dog, because it often helped Henry do that. Then it ran to the post office quickly.

A moment later, the dog came back with a letter in his mouth. Henry was very surprised when he saw it. He looked at the letter carefully, and then he found something was wrong with it. Henry realized he had made a mistake—He was so careless that he forgot to stick a stamp on this letter. Finally he thanked his dog.

【解析】

這是一篇看圖作文，要求學(xué)生們仔細(xì)觀察圖片，并展開合理想象，將圖片中的內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)先仔細(xì)瀏覽圖片，弄清楚每個(gè)圖片想要傳達(dá)的信息，并將其串聯(lián)成一個(gè)完整的故事。審題可知：短文應(yīng)該是記敘文，講述一件已經(jīng)發(fā)生的事情，因此整篇文章應(yīng)使用一般過去時(shí)，注意謂語動(dòng)詞變?yōu)檫^去式，尤其注意不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的變化；人稱應(yīng)為第三人稱。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先內(nèi)容應(yīng)符合圖片描述，可以展開合理的想象，但應(yīng)符合圖片傳達(dá)的信息。其次應(yīng)注意英語句式的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維，逐詞翻譯。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，選擇適當(dāng)?shù)木湫�、短語和詞匯，可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句，提升作文檔次。同時(shí)語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章內(nèi)容連貫、表達(dá)流暢。