Question

【題目】請(qǐng)以My best friend為題寫一篇作文。要點(diǎn)如下，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

要點(diǎn)：1.Amy是我最好的朋友，也是我的鄰居。

2.她很聰明，學(xué)習(xí)也很用功。對(duì)中國(guó)的歷史很了解，也擅長(zhǎng)于寫作。

3.經(jīng)常參加一些戶外活動(dòng)，像騎馬、野營(yíng)之類的。

4.很善良，經(jīng)常幫助別人。

要求：1.內(nèi)容完整，書寫清晰，書寫規(guī)范

2.60詞左右

參考詞匯：neighbor 鄰居

My best friend

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Answer 1

【答案】I have a good friend. Her name is Amy. She lives next to my house.

She is good at her lessons. She’s very smart. She knows history well. I often learn from her. She does well in writings. She is also good at outdoor activities. She likes riding horses and going camping. She is kind. She is ready to help others. She is in a club called helping. She often gives her seat to others on buses. Last week she saw a poor boy. She helped him.

【解析】試題分析：本篇習(xí)作成功地完成了寫作任務(wù)，表達(dá)順暢，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，要點(diǎn)全面，語法正確，上下文意思連貫，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮了想象。短語的使用使得文章很生動(dòng)，例如next to，be good at，like doing sth.，be ready to等。而多種句式的運(yùn)用則是本文的亮點(diǎn)，例如，I have a good friend.，She is good at her lessons.，She likes riding horses and going camping.，Last week she saw a poor boy.等。顯然，這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的習(xí)作。