Question

【題目】根據(jù)所給提示，寫一篇以My Good Friend為題的短文, 不少于50詞。

Kate, friend, like, sing, swimming, play games, math, English, China, Chinese food...

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Answer 1

【答案】

My Good Friend

My good friend is Kate. She is 14 years old. She is from America. We are in the same class. She likes singing and swimming. And she likes playing games, too. She is good at maths and English. She likes China and she also likes Chinese food. We often study together. At weekends, we often play games together.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以My Good Friend 為題目，寫一篇作文，介紹一下自己最好的朋友。題目中給我們列出了一些提示詞，我們可以按照這些提示詞，將他們組成文章，介紹自己的好朋友Kate。介紹人物的時(shí)候，我們通�？梢詮囊韵聨讉�(gè)方面入手，如她的名字、年齡、國(guó)籍，再如她的外貌，她的愛好、她喜歡的顏色、運(yùn)動(dòng)、科目等等。根據(jù)提示詞可知，這里說(shuō)到了自己好朋友的名字是Kate，她的愛好，唱歌，游泳，玩游戲；她喜歡或擅長(zhǎng)的科目；她和中國(guó)的關(guān)系等。當(dāng)然我們也可以補(bǔ)充其他的內(nèi)容，這就需要我們發(fā)揮自己的想象，但是一定要注意，所增加的內(nèi)容要符合全文的表達(dá)需要。這篇短文應(yīng)該使用第三人稱she，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，故我們要特別注意每句話中謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的第三人稱單數(shù)形式的變化。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文，短文中作者按照題目要求介紹了自己的好朋友Kate。首先他給我們介紹了Kate的年齡和國(guó)籍，She is 14 years old. She is from America.。這里作者還補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明了We are in the same class，他們?cè)谕�一個(gè)班里；接下來(lái)作者說(shuō)的是Kate的愛好和她擅長(zhǎng)的事情，She likes singing and swimming. And she likes playing games, too. She is good at maths and English.然后作者寫的是她和中國(guó)的關(guān)系，她喜歡中國(guó)，喜歡中國(guó)食物，She likes China and she also likes Chinese food.最后作者寫的是自己和Kate經(jīng)常一起做的事情。整篇短文內(nèi)容完整，內(nèi)容豐富，語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確，注意了第三人稱單數(shù)形式的變化。也使用了一些連詞，使文章意思連貫。