Question

【題目】書面表達（共1題，計20分）

根據(jù)以下提示，請你用英語寫一篇短文，簡要介紹一下韓國演員金秀賢。

要點如下：1. 1988年2月出生，與大多數(shù)明星不同，小時候安靜又靦腆。

2. 媽媽很擔(dān)心，因為發(fā)現(xiàn)很難與他交流，所以帶他去上表演課；

3. 他勤奮努力，改變了很多，夢想成為一名著名的演員；

4. 2007年第一次亮相于電視屏幕，就立刻聞名于亞洲。

5. 2013年主演《來自星星的你》（The man from the star）,大獲成功；

6. 由于他的努力…… （用1—2句話展開合理想象） 字?jǐn)?shù)在90字左右。

參考詞匯：靦腆 shy 上表演課 take acting lessons

Answer 1

【答案】

Jin Xiuxian is a famous South Korean actress. He was born in Feburary, 1988. He is different from most famous stars. He was very shy and quiet when he was young. His mother found it difficult to talk with him and she was very worried about him, so she took him to take acting lessons. He liked acting and worked very hard, he changed a lot, and he dreamed to become a famous actress.

The first time he acted on TV was in 2007, it was a great success. He was famous all over Aisa quickly. Next, the TV play The man from the star he acted got another great success in 2013. Though he has got lots of prizes, he still works hard. I think he will make great progress in acting in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要描述韓國著名演員金秀賢的成長歷程，因此一般過去時運用較多。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。當(dāng)然，寫作時尤要注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)的合理，表述的條理性和準(zhǔn)確性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

寫作亮點：該范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫。尤為突出之處在短語和句子的巧妙運用，如be different from；be worried about；dream to do sth.；The first time he acted on TV was in 2007, it was a great success；Though he has got lots of prizes, he still works hard等這些短語和句子的運用也讓文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。