Question

12．中學(xué)生既有繁重的學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)，也豐富多彩的校園生活．作為中學(xué)生的一員，談你學(xué)習(xí)之余所喜愛(ài)的活動(dòng)．
1、寫作要點(diǎn)：
1）體育、音樂(lè)或某類興趣小組；
2）為什么喜歡這類活動(dòng)，怎樣參加這類活動(dòng)；
3）將來(lái)有什么樣的理想．
2、寫作要求：
1）短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含所提示的要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言要流暢，可圍繞提示要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，以使短文意思連貫；
2）短文用詞在90個(gè)左右．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
They give us much knowledge that we can't learn at school．他們給我們?cè)S多我們不能在學(xué)校學(xué)到的知識(shí)．that we can't learn at school是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞knowledge．
高分句型二
I find it's a good way to relax myself．我發(fā)現(xiàn)這是一個(gè)放松自己的好方法．這是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，I find是主句，后面的是賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 I am a middle school student．Though I'm busy with my lessons，my school life is still colorful．【開篇點(diǎn)明主題】After school I usually play sports．I like basketball and football very much．Sports help me to keep healthy and study better．I often do some reading in the evening．I think books are our best friends．They give us much knowledge that we can't learn at school【高分句型一，注意定語(yǔ)從句的使用】．So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time．Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet．I find it's a good way to relax myself【高分句型二，注意賓語(yǔ)從句的使用】．At the same time it can also help me open up my eyes to the outside world．At the weekends  I often help my parents with the housework．I clean the house，wash clothes and learn to cook．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹課余生活】
 I will be a  teacher when I grow up，I will try my best to help my students and play sports with them after class．【結(jié)尾部分講述將來(lái)的打算】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，多閱讀此類題材，將詞匯歸類整理；動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞．寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．