Question

親愛的同學，初中生活很快就要結束了。回顧三年的生活，你一定有很多收獲吧。假如你叫李明，你的美國筆友Mike對中國學生的生活非常感興趣。請你根據以下提示，寫一封信談一談你自己在初中三年里的美好回憶與收獲。

1.學校生活（喜歡的老師，喜歡的學科，取得的進步等）

2.課外生活（興趣，愛好，交友等）

3.……

注意：1.字數(shù)80—100；2.請結合實際增加細節(jié)，適當發(fā)揮；3.不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名、姓名或透露與個人身份相關的其他信息；4.信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mike，

Thanks for your last letter.I'm very happy to tell you something about my middle school life.

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What  about you？Can you write to tell me  something about your school life?                                                                                                                         

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mike,

　　Thanks for your last letter.I'm very happy to tell you something about my middle school life.

　　In study, I am good at Chinese and English, while math is my weakness.  Mr. Li is my math teacher.He often helped me with my studies very patiently. With his help, I made great progress in math and caught up with my classmates. He was always very kind to every student. As an experienced teacher, he was respected and loved by all his students.

　　I have many interests. Swimming, reading and movie are my favorites, which bring color to my busy study life. Besides, I am easygoing and likely to make friends with others. Friendship is an important part of my life.This is my middle school life.What  about you？Can you write to tell me  something about your school life?

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，寫一寫自己初中三年的回憶與收獲。由于在要點中只給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前要圍繞要點組織材料，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題，根據要求可知本句主要是一般現(xiàn)在及過去時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：本題給出的材料較為簡略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。