Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你叫李明，你的美國筆友Jeff發(fā)來郵件，他打算來中國拜訪你，請你通過郵件介紹一下你的家鄉(xiāng)。請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容提示及要求給他寫一封80—100詞的回信。

Hometown	Dezhou
Location	in the northwest of Shandong Province
Population	over 80,000
Weather	hot in summer; cold in winter
Advice	best time to visit Dezhou -- spring; things to take -- a coat and sweater; a camera
Way of life	…(至少兩條)

參考詞匯：location 地理位置

要求：1. 郵件內(nèi)容包括家鄉(xiāng)名字、地理位置、人口、天氣、旅行建議，并介紹家鄉(xiāng)的生活方式（至少兩條）；

2. 語言通順，要點(diǎn)齊全，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名；

4. 文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jeff,

Glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you something about my hometown.

My home town is Dezhou, a city in the northeast of Shandong Province. The population of Dezhou is over 80,000. In Dezhou, it is hot in summer and cold in winter. There are storms from time to time in summer.

Our city is clean and beautiful. I think the best time to visit Dezhou is in spring. It might be cold, so don’t forget to bring a coat and a sweater. What’s more, it’s a good idea to take a camera with you. You can take photos of beautiful trees and lakes.

In Dezhou, we usually have meals with chopsticks. When we meet for the first time, we don’t hug or kiss each other. We often shake hands and smile at each other.

Welcome to Dezhou! I will take you around our city.

I’m looking forward to meeting you.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，本文是給Jeff寫一封電子郵件來介紹我的家鄉(xiāng)。

結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My home town is……，it is……，Our city is……，it’s a good idea to……，When we meet……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。