Question

【題目】寫作。

假如你是劉東，你打算在寒假里做一些有意義的事，請你根據(jù)下面的提示，給你的筆友Tom寫一封郵件，談?wù)勀愕拇蛩恪?/span>

要求：1. 要點齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 行文流暢、表達準確、書寫規(guī)范；

3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的真實姓名、校名和地名；

4. 詞數(shù)80左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tom,

How are you? The winter holiday is coming. For this holiday, I plan to________________

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All the best!

Yours,

Liu Dong

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Tom,

How are you? The winter holiday is coming. I have many plans. For this holiday, I plan to do some shopping to buy my favorite fruits and snacks. Because the Spring Festival is coming, I will prepare some delicious food and beautiful clothes to enjoy the festival. And I will buy some presents for my parents. I plan to visit my friends and watch TV, especially the shows I like best. Above all, I will read some famous works to enrich my horizon. It must be interesting and meaningful.

How are you spending your winter holiday? Please write to me soon.

All the best!

Yours,

Liu Dong

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，劉東寫信給湯姆介紹自己寒假的計劃。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I plan to..., I will…,It must be…,How are you…?等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了寒假將至，自己有很多計劃，接下來介紹我的具體計劃：購物，準備美食過春節(jié)，看望朋友，看電視，讀書，最后詢問湯姆的寒假計劃。此處plan to do sth, do some shopping, buy sth for sb, above all等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。