Question

9．親愛的同學(xué)們，初中生活即將結(jié)束!在此離別之際，恰逢《中學(xué)生英語》征稿，請你以"A（n）--（Lucky/Unusual/Excitin9/Proud/Regretful（遺憾的）/…）Thing"為題，簡要描述一件你親身經(jīng)歷的、印象深刻的事情，并談?wù)勀銖倪@件事中所獲得的啟示．要求：
1．寫短文前，請用一個恰當(dāng)?shù)男稳菰~補全下面的標(biāo)題，所用形容詞可以從上面括號中選取，也可以另外選擇；
2．語句通順，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容連貫；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和姓名：
4．詞數(shù)：80-100詞．短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
A（n）Thing
In the past three years，the life of middle school has impressed me deeply．Many stories happened．The following is one of them．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，寫作內(nèi)容是描述一件自己親身經(jīng)歷的、印象深刻的事情，并談?wù)剰倪@件事中所獲得的啟示，因此應(yīng)該以一般過去時為主，人稱是第一人稱，在選題時，要注意題目的中心，是以"A（n）--（Lucky/Unusual/Excitin9/Proud/Regretful（遺憾的）/…）Thing"為題，不能與題目脫離．

解答 A Regretful Thing
     In the past three years，the life of middle school has impressed me deeply．Many stories happened．The following is one of them．
     Xiao Ming was on e of my good friends．One day，a little thing caused a serious quarrel between us．From then on，we didn't talk to each other．I had hoped to make peace with him，but I finally failed to do that because of my being afraid of losing face．Not until when he moved to another city
with his parents did I know I lost my friend forever．
     The lesson I learnt from this is that if you realize your mistakes，you should correct them at once，or you may leave yourself lasting regrets．

點評 本題是一篇以提綱提供情景的作文，寫作時要審清文章的要求性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點．同時要根據(jù)文章的體裁和要求，注意人稱和時態(tài)的正確選擇．