Question

8．體育運(yùn)動是中學(xué)生的共同愛好．請你根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇題為 What We Get from Sports 的短文，短文應(yīng)包含以下要點(diǎn)：
1．學(xué)生參加體育運(yùn)動的興趣不同，理由各異．
2．多數(shù)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)疲倦時，通過運(yùn)動來放松自己．
3．男孩們參加各項體育活動，希望運(yùn)動能使自己更強(qiáng)壯．
4．女孩們也喜歡運(yùn)動，希望運(yùn)動能幫助自己減肥和保持苗條．
5．你對運(yùn)動的觀點(diǎn)．
注意：*文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
*短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．字?jǐn)?shù)：80詞左右，不可逐字翻譯．
*參考詞語：lose weight，keep slim （保持苗條）
What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common---an interest in sports．But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports．
Many students have sports when they feel tired after study．They just want to relax themselves and have fun．Most boys love sports．They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger．They join in the sports that interest them
most，such as soccer，basketball and volleyball．Girls also like sports．Some of them they want to lose weight，to be slim and pretty by doing sports．
In my opinion，no matter what reasons we have，we all can get a lot from sports．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇議論文，談?wù)撟约簩�運(yùn)動的觀點(diǎn)和看法，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．提出目前學(xué)生對運(yùn)動的不同看法及其原因．2．具體分析（多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)、男生的觀點(diǎn)、女生的觀點(diǎn)）3．提出自己對運(yùn)動的觀點(diǎn)．

解答 Students in our school have one thing in common-an interest in sports． But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports．
    Many students have sports when they feel tired after study．They just want to relax themselves and have fun．Most boys love sports．They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger．They join in the sports that interest them most，such as soccer，basketball and volleyball．Girls also like sports．Some of them they want to lose weight，to be slim and pretty by doing sports．
    In my opinion，no matter what reasons we have，we all can get a lot from sports．

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