【題目】書面表達(dá)。

假如你是學(xué)生會主席丁丁,請你根據(jù)表格中的提示寫一篇100字左右的倡議書,號召同學(xué)們幫助有困難的人。要求語句通順,語法正確。

人物

小林,貧困地區(qū)的一個中學(xué)生

現(xiàn)狀

已經(jīng)住院2個月

得了很嚴(yán)重的眼科疾病

需要做手術(shù),花費(fèi)30多萬元

困境

父母都是工人,支付不起做手術(shù)的費(fèi)用

不做手術(shù)可能會失去生命

幫助方式

ORBIS得知后,用他的飛行眼科醫(yī)院探訪了了他。在飛機(jī)上,志愿者醫(yī)生給小林做了手術(shù)。

總結(jié)

……(自由發(fā)揮一至兩點)

Dear all:

A primary student from the poor area ____________________________!

The student’s name is Xiao lin. _________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________.

Thanks a lot for your help!

Ding Ding

【答案】

Dear all:

A primary student from the poor area need our help!

The student’s name is Xiao Lin. He has been in hospital for two months. He has got a serious eye disease. He needs to have an operation. It will take about 300000 yuan to have an operation. His parents are all workers. They can't afford to pay the cost of the operation. If he doesn’t have an operation, he may lose his life. After ORBIS learns it. They will visit him with his flying eye hospital. On the plane, the volunteer doctors will have an operation on Xiao Lin. We hope you can give a hand to him, His family and we thank you. The fire burns high when everybody adds wood to it. Everyone gives a little love, the world will become a better world.

Thanks a lot for your help!

Ding Ding

【解析】

試題分析:這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì),我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,不可遺漏要點,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題及注意事項。注意跟進(jìn)材料內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和將來時態(tài),人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱,注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配問題。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。

寫作兩點:這篇是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文,字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求,語言通順,意思連貫,條理清楚,書寫規(guī)范。文中使用了一些固定句式及短語It will take about 300000 yuan to have an operation. His parents are all workers. They can't afford to pay the cost of the operation.等,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

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