Question

15．假如你是Kim，請(qǐng)給你最想交流的人寫(xiě)一封信，介紹你某一學(xué)科的一次考試，包括考前、考中和考后的感受．
提示：1．請(qǐng)補(bǔ)全橫線上的稱謂；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名及地名；
3．詞數(shù)在80詞左右，開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
DearCarol，
I'm writing to tell you about myEnglish exam．You know I'm not good at English．I find it difficult．My English teacher advised me to listen to something interesting and do more exercises．I did what she told me and made progress．We had an English exam last week．I was very nervous．But I tried to keep my cool and did very carefully．For the first time I did well．I'm so happy and I feel successful now．I want to share my happiness with you．Let's help each other．
Yours，Kim

Yours，
Kim．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是給你最想交流的人寫(xiě)一封信，介紹你某一學(xué)科的一次考試，包括考前、考中和考后的感受，注意信件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．考前
2．考中；
3．考后
 
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
be good at 擅長(zhǎng)
advise sb to do sth 建議某人去做某事
make progress 取得進(jìn)步
share sth with sb 與某人分享某物
【高分句型】
 1．You know①②I'm not good at English．
①know后是省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②be good at 擅長(zhǎng)
2．I did ①what she told me and②made progress．
①what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，作為did的賓語(yǔ)．
②make progress 取得進(jìn)步
3．For the first time I did well．
For the first time 第一次

解答 Dear Carol，
I'm writing to tell you about my English exam．You know I'm not good at English．【高分句型】I find it difficult．My English teacher advised me to listen to something interesting and do more exercises．I did what she told me and made progress．（考前）【高分句型】We had an English exam last week．I was very nervous．But I tried to keep my cool and did very carefully．（考中）For the first time I did well．【高分句型】I'm so happy and I feel successful now．（考后）I want to share my happiness with you．Let's help each other．
Yours，Kim

點(diǎn)評(píng) 應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作不同于其他作文的一個(gè)特點(diǎn)就是格式問(wèn)題，需要注意英語(yǔ)書(shū)信的書(shū)寫(xiě)格式不同于中文書(shū)信．另外就是寫(xiě)作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫(xiě)作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤．只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)．另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依．