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根據(jù)提示，以“Lucy’s lifestyle”為題，寫一篇短文；短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn), 要求語句通順、意思連貫。要點(diǎn)如下：

1.Lucy今年14歲。每天吃各種各樣健康的食物來保持健康。

2.她早餐經(jīng)常吃雞蛋，面包和牛奶。早餐幫助她很好地開始一天的生活。

3.課間她通常吃些水果。午餐和晚餐吃米飯，魚，肉和蔬菜。

4.她每天喝八杯水。但是她很少鍛煉。

5.她想改變她的生活方式�，F(xiàn)在她計(jì)劃……(適當(dāng)發(fā)揮1-2句)

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【答案】

One possible version：

Lucy’s lifestyle

Lucy is fourteen years old this year. Every day she eats all kinds of healthy food to keep fit. Every morning she often has eggs, bread and milk for breakfast. It helps her start the day well. She usually eats some fruit between classes. And she has rice, fish, meat and vegetables for lunch and dinner. She drinks eight glasses of water, but she seldom exercises. Now she wants to change her lifestyle, she plans to go swimming every day.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹Lucy的生活方式。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Lucy is...，It helps her ...，And she has...，Now she wants...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意完整的表達(dá)出提綱中所列內(nèi)容。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了Lucy的年齡，每天吃各種各樣的健康食物，接下來介紹她的三餐，以及她很少鍛煉，最后介紹她想改變自己的生活方式，計(jì)劃去做運(yùn)動(dòng)。此處all kinds of, keep fit, help sb do sth, want to do sth, plan to do sth, go swimming等這些詞組的運(yùn)用讓文章增色不少。