Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

好多同學(xué)有不良的生活習(xí)慣。例如，不吃早飯，經(jīng)常吃零食（snacks）,而且隨手丟棄廢棄物; 廢寢忘食地玩手機(jī)，不運(yùn)動(dòng)，不按時(shí)作息；部分男生認(rèn)為抽煙很酷，以至于經(jīng)常抽煙等等。請用英語寫一篇短文，指出其害處并提出有利于健康的良好習(xí)慣。

要求：

1、文章內(nèi)容符合題意，語句通順，有條理。

2、詞數(shù)70詞左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Bad eating habits can destroy our health. There are lots of bad eating habits in our life which we always ignore.

For example, some students don’t eat breakfast. They eat junk food too much. They throw rubbish everywhere. We should eat more vegetables. They are good for our health. They spend a lot of time playing games. They don’t do sports. They stay up late too late. We need to sleep eight hours a day so that we can keep active. Some boys think smoking is cool so they smoke a lot.

It is bad for us to smoke.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如They are good for our health.等，F(xiàn)or example等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。